The Child's Reply to Her Mother.
Steve at Without Envy broke my heart by answering, by way of poetry, the letters I wrote to BSparl while she was growing inside of me. I'm very honored to be sharing his words with you guys today, as I read them to myself over and over again in the hospital, waiting patiently for my daughter to arrive.
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The Child's Reply to Her Mother
Dear Mommy,
Were the world imperfect and only so cozy
compared to your big pregnant belly,
I would wish for these moments to last,
To be as close as I am to you now.
But Sound lends music to eager ears;
Thoughts turn from angst and guiltless fears;
And Galileo falls quiet;
This child inside you stirs.
Old Winter has gone, and blossoming flowers,
Bibs, small dresses and candy pacifiers, are sprung in baby showers;
While monitors, cultures, and blood pressure cuffs,
Hold but a whisper’s attention.
Fluids and proteins, and peeing in hats,
Headaches, fat feet and carpel tunnel wraps,
Will soon give way to the soft touch of your hand;
This child inside you stirs.
But could nature embrace, and wrap tenderly
The same tender love you’ve woven for me,
In your arms do I wish for these moments to last,
To be as close as I am to you now.
Love,
Baby
Written by Steve, who blogs at Without Envy. Please visit his site and appreciate his fine writing!
Comments
What beautiful words. Kerri, I'm a few months behind you- Type 1, expecting my first baby (girl) in 9 weeks, delivering at BIDMC, and your letters to BSparl have resonated strongly with how I feel about this little one inside me. After reading the 'baby's response'- I think I need about 16 more tissues and a visit to Steve's blog to thank him! :)
Posted by: Katie | July 1, 2010 05:15 PM
Steve sure does have a way with words. Just gorgeous and worth saving for when BSparl grows and has children of her own. Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing Kerri.
Posted by: Penny | July 1, 2010 07:40 PM
Awww, so bittersweet.
Posted by: Rachel | July 2, 2010 11:08 AM
Holy crap, that was lovely. For reals.
Posted by: Nicolep | July 6, 2010 11:52 AM
That was magical. Thank you for introducing me to a brilliant writer. :-)
Posted by: Scott K. Johnson | July 13, 2010 05:07 PM